What do you think of my song?

Be truthful please because I want to improve it as I know it's bad :/ haa x





I鈥檓 in my room doing homework you get boys to do,


No foundation on my face 鈥榗os you鈥檝e got it all on you.


And you鈥檙e listening to the tunes that you think are cool,


And dancing to JLS like an obsessive fool


It鈥檚 hard to believe we have the same blood,


As you act real gangster in your boyfriends hood.


Hey little girl; you鈥檙e still only a child,


Lay off the clinique shizz and go a bit wild.





Who says that you should fake through life?


And hang out with guys who carry penknives?


You can do better than that, don鈥檛 you think?


You can put me before those who鈥檒l just let you sink.





Just live, live, live.


Live and let live.


Leave me alone and fix out yourself.


Oooh, Leave me alone until you change yourself.


Live, live, live





So you鈥檙e an expert on playing boys and throwing them away,


Yeah, you鈥檙e really the girl of their dreams, hey?


nicking beer from the fridge is how you have fun,


Not Capri-sun fights in the kitchen or prank calls at one.


You smell like Lynx and self neglect,


You鈥檙e like an overdone emo with less self respect.


Fake tan on your arms and lip gloss on your shirt,


Seriously girl, this is gonna get you hurt.





Who says that you should backstab through this?


And hang out with guys who just want you to kiss?


You can do better than that, don鈥檛 you think?


You can put away the hate, the mini skirts, the drink.





Just live, live, live.


Live and let live.


Leave me alone and fix out yourself.


Oooh, Leave me alone until you change yourself.


Live, live, live





Oh, you didn鈥檛 put me first,


And you took the guy I like.


Couldn鈥檛 you just stick with the


One who wore Henleys and Nike?


It鈥檚 impossible for you,


To let me have one part.


Can I forgive you,


For again breaking my heart?





Just live, live, live.


Live and let live.


Leave me alone and fix out yourself.


Oooh, Leave me alone until you change yourself.


Live, live, live


Live and Let live.


That鈥檚 not how you play.


Live, live, live.


Ooh.





xWhat do you think of my song?
amazing!..... but the penknive guy part was a bit 2 freak-ish that was a really nice song and i think taylor swift shud sing it....it goes with her song types unless u wanna sing it urself which(not 2 be negative) wont be rly fameous but it was an awesome song!What do you think of my song?
Pretty good song. Expresses alot of feelings.
Those are lyrics, not a song.
i think its awesome!